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M an of God,yet sinner too O rdained to rule and guide S aviour of the Hebrew side E xposotor of the word and law S inger of songs..and author See more at Ex 2 Acts 7 Ex 4 Deut 5 Ex 15 Deut 32

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/14/2009 7:49:00 PM

Although he led his people, he died before they arrived. Perhaps his Promised Land was greater than the one he was going to. Vince

Fernando Lachica

Date: 5/12/2009 6:55:00 AM

Awesome and beautifully constructed acrostic poem...

Charles Fuller

Date: 5/10/2009 5:32:00 PM

A wonderful acrostic poem. You really capture his essence. So very creative and well thought out. And very good to be reading your work again. My best to you sir. ~Charlie

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/10/2009 8:34:00 AM

awesome--just so creative yet all is true---charma

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/10/2009 8:18:00 AM

Wonderful descriptions.....great work!! :) Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/10/2009 7:26:00 AM

wonderfully done brother Brian...love the title....Moses was an awesome soul.

Diane Christian

Date: 5/10/2009 7:14:00 AM

cool so cool, so true my husband loves this one, he has a prayer staff when he had his beard all kids in chuch asked are you like moses, a great write I love your faith poems God bless you from diane

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/10/2009 1:26:00 AM

This is a great reflection of Moses. Loved the first line...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/10/2009 12:45:00 AM

Very nice acrostic, Brian. You certainly know how to present Biblical figures in verse. Love, Carolyn