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Draw

is this how the story ends?
another tragic love affair
where everything right turns wrong
just another sad, sad song

I held on much too long
to a dream that didn't hold back
cupid shoots but is off with his aim
always a loser in every game

is this how the story ends?
the distance grows on either side
loving you was always hard
I guess we call the end a draw
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 10:13 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today J B. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Trevino Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 7:04 PM
wow, i never stoped to think that but how true, an affair could feel so right but end tragic, much enjoyed J B, =(^.^)=Royal
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