Drained of All Water

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Deprived of life, treeless Earth weep There is no longer Earth. Rivers, forests, and dying nature; how are we going to save Earth. And Sudsy waters are too heavily salty to drink by any birth. Is hapless Earth no longer a planet when all its trees are dearth. Newly threatened global warming as fossil fuel caused a dirty tarnish. Erosion of a healthy life is allowed for the sake of fancy house worth. Domesticated Chickens are the most killed species on Earth. Off-season rain adds up and snow, but the grass doesn't temper. For kids, it's the snow that they need and hot cocoa extempore. And then the sun starts to heat up and burns the flowers again. Let's all be an asset of the solution in helping to relieve her pain. Lets the process dive in progressively; it is time to awaken. World of peace; this is a picture that represents optimism, not dope. All we could do to improve this world, especially for our kid's hope. Though if we have screwed up, have mercy on those we have mope. Every day, Earth suffers; water is dwindling; how can we cope? Running away from our current calamity is plundering the Earth without scope. Written: May 8, 2021 Planet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Matt Caliri

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/9/2021 12:22:00 PM

Interesting poem, Lasaad, with great rhyme and flow. I loved your images, but your message is blood-curdling. I'm afraid this is our future, however. I think Matt will appreciate your work.

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/9/2021 12:38:00 PM

I like hearing from you, dear Milton. Thanks for taking the time to visit my page, and thank you very much for your kind continuous encouragement.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/9/2021 3:49:00 AM

May your poem be heard by all the inhabitants of this world and may all of us do their part to save our mother earth. An inspiring and profound poem, my dearest friend, Lassaad. Felicitations! Blessings.

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/9/2021 9:48:00 AM

Dearest Demetrios, As for our efforts, it is true that they will should be heard to keep the earth's resources healthy. Have a wonderful day, dear friend

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/9/2021 3:21:00 AM

Unfortunately this is what is going to happen if we do not take urgent steps. Loved your poem.

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/9/2021 9:51:00 AM

Thanks for reading, dear Victor, don't you think it's a little late.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/8/2021 11:00:00 PM

We need to put our Mother first Lasaad. I totally agree. Her resources are limited because of man’s greed. Your last stanza really brings your point home. Excellent my friend. Blessings xxoo

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/9/2021 2:18:00 AM

Thank you so much, Connie; I appreciate your kind words and feedback; it's time for us to wake up to save our mother earth if it's not already late... Blessings, dear Connie, and warm hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2021 1:32:00 PM

- A wonderful poem, Las - I agree it's time to wake up - Best wishes in the contest ... I hope to see it high on the winners list :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/8/2021 2:35:00 PM

Thank you so much, Dear Anne-Lise, I appreciate your reading and your kind wishes, have a great evening with a lot of regards, love, and peace // lasaad