Dragonfly

look .. a dragonfly passing by 

willow at the lake .. i hear 

you cry / new sunrise 


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an old man/woman shed a tear of joy 
as they wake up the morning after .. and life goes faster
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 12:53 PM
this was a great piece i loved it because it reminded me of my childhood watching the dragon flies with my sis was one of our favorite activities. thanks for the good read for me. =)jo
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September 20, 2009 at 10:26 AM
Love this beautiful piece! A warm welcome to Poetry Soup! ~ Carrie
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September 19, 2009 at 4:52 PM
Your comparisons are neat to dig out of your work...
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