Dragonfly

Dragonfly, shiny Windup toy, in flight, you dance Among the cattails.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Jeavons Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 2:49 PM
M.L. Kiser, it sure does look like a wind-up toy! I enjoyed your Haiku., Susan
Kiser Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 4:38 PM
Thanks Susan, I've always thought so, too.
Staton Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 9:30 PM
Very well written.
Kiser Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 8:33 AM
Thank you Valerie; I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 11:43 PM
It does look like a windup toy! Perfect!
Kiser Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 6:24 AM
Luv'em. I used to visit a cousin's farm and by their pond, there were tons of cattails. I used to love watching those dragon flies around the pond; the cattails were full of them.
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 11:35 AM
Good work M.L.
Kiser Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 1:10 PM
Thank you Charlie.
Sands Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 7:56 AM
I love this! So well done and creative. I want to save it as a FAVE too! :)
Kiser Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 1:10 PM
Thanks Heidi, I am thrilled.
Gauthier Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 6:49 AM
Lovely. A FAVE for me.
Kiser Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 1:11 PM
Many thanks; I am glad.
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