Dragonfly

Dragonfly, shiny Windup toy, in flight, you dance Among the cattails.

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Susan Jeavons

Date: 2/3/2019 2:49:00 PM

M.L. Kiser, it sure does look like a wind-up toy! I enjoyed your Haiku., Susan

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/3/2019 4:38:00 PM

Thanks Susan, I've always thought so, too.

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/18/2019 9:30:00 PM

Very well written.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/19/2019 8:33:00 AM

Thank you Valerie; I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/17/2019 11:43:00 PM

It does look like a windup toy! Perfect!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/18/2019 6:24:00 AM

Luv'em. I used to visit a cousin's farm and by their pond, there were tons of cattails. I used to love watching those dragon flies around the pond; the cattails were full of them.

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/17/2019 11:35:00 AM

Good work M.L.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/17/2019 1:10:00 PM

Thank you Charlie.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/17/2019 7:56:00 AM

I love this! So well done and creative. I want to save it as a FAVE too! :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/17/2019 1:10:00 PM

Thanks Heidi, I am thrilled.

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/17/2019 6:49:00 AM

Lovely. A FAVE for me.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/17/2019 1:11:00 PM

Many thanks; I am glad.