Dragonflies Breath

Dragonflies Breath, by Shane Cogan (Haiku style)




                                   warm and cold it flew
                                 purple lake at dawn lay still
                                   wings too quick to see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 10, 2013 at 10:01 AM
Thanks very much guys. I am very new to haiku, so just trying some new words and ideas.
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April 10, 2013 at 4:24 AM
I like this haiku, Shane. Very picturesque! David
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April 10, 2013 at 3:45 AM
- Beautiful haiku, Shane ... well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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