Downtime and Dust Trio

timeout

polished sandstone grains
fine trickle through time's measure
in downturned hourglass


            made out of dust

man grinds man to dust
harsh words make quicksand for him
dust speaks up for dust


           Elah unveiled

in Elah's vale
a stone's throw from enigma
gigantic hate falls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 11/17/2019 4:14:00 PM
My Father was Afrikaans, my mother from England- Hubby is also SA. We stay not far from Ruimsug, my boys stay in Northcliffe area- There are a few SA poets here- enjoy the "Soup!" Its a great mix of poets! Warm regards, Aqua M .
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/17/2019 4:45:00 PM
My Sister used to stay in Bergbron back of Northcliffe but she moved up by Flora Centre. My Dad used to be in Property i remember going with him to the Auction when they were selling the Plots on Ruimsig and when it was then the end of world. Now there is a Casino , Mall and Complexes as far as the Cradle of Humankind
Date: 11/17/2019 4:02:00 PM
Good seems to back onto Bad. I see you are from S.A Aqua. I am a Soutpiel half and half from S.A Florida Joburg and half English from Liverpool.
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Aqua Marine
Date: 11/17/2019 4:14:00 PM
See comment above...lol.
Date: 10/13/2018 10:19:00 AM
Very poetic and deftly expressed.
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Aqua Marine
Date: 10/13/2018 10:34:00 AM
Thank you! Coming from a well respected poet as yourself, I do appreciate your visit and comment!
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