Downtime

When the sun sets
the moon comes rising
the stars around dancing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 7:39 PM
this is so cute. LUV it.
Tacito Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 11:19 AM
A very adorable & peaceful Haiku. We all need moments like this. Nice to meet you, Charmane!
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 1:26 PM
- Lovely written haiku ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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