Downstream

The water is cold, 
I sit stiffly in the boat.
Again, I am lost.

The oars are secured.
Going downstream is a risk,
My eyes are open

I am quite a wreck,
Not knowing where to begin.
My eyes squeeze shut.

Where will I go now?
Lethergy lulls me to sleep,
I breathe in and out.

Surely, I must move?
The wind is silent and calm
I spin all around.

Let go of the oars!
Today is the day to trust.
The sun is warming,

Stretch out and relax.
Shallow water is muddy,
Not life threatening.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 4, 2010 at 5:36 PM
Nice haiku series. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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June 3, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Karen. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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April 12, 2010 at 12:21 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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April 12, 2010 at 11:16 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Karen. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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January 29, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Very beautiful, and inspiring poem, I love it!! Welcome to the soup. May your days be flowing with inspiration.
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