Downpour

Love your dark grey face
With silver flash of anger
Downpour of tantrums.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Staton Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 8:18 AM
Wonderful imagery.
Andresen Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 5:05 AM
- Some believe that haiku poems is so easy to write - but it's not true - Well done, Harpreet - This was touching - and powerful! - // Anne-Lise :)
Kaur Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 12:22 AM
Hello Anne. Thank you so much for your encouraging feedback. And yes, apologies for the delayed reply. I read your compositions, including those haikus you mentioned. Good job. I will read more from you soon and leave my comments. Keep writing and growing!
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