Downpour

Raindrops Small, water Trickling, falling, pouring Drizzle, rainfall, shower, downpour Bucketing, hailing, drenching Icy, cold Sleet

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Barbara Peckham

Date: 7/27/2021 10:14:00 AM

Perfect form and well written. Thanks for sharing. The vocabulary is right on target.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/21/2021 3:29:00 PM

Hello Liz Archer, In the3 summer the downpour of rain is cooling. It is not cold. Except for the winter months it is a cold rain. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/23/2021 11:49:00 AM

Hello Liz Archer, Liz I am sorry that I got that wrong. I do like your poem. i love the rain hitting the window. i like to walk in a downpour. Enjoy your day my friend.

Liz Archer
Date: 7/22/2021 8:49:00 AM

I never said it was summertime in the poem but thanks. Have a lovely evening too.

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/21/2021 1:58:00 PM

A wonderful diamante, Liz. I enjoyed your transition from rain to sleet. The chill of your last two lines is refreshing in the wilting heat of summer. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Liz Archer
Date: 7/22/2021 8:48:00 AM

Thank you Susan. Glad you enjoyed it :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/21/2021 1:23:00 PM

Its coming Liz, we'll pay for this heatwave. Hope you're coping with it. Tom

Liz Archer
Date: 7/21/2021 1:38:00 PM

Lol yes it's coming Saturday! I'm looking forward to it cooling off. I have low blood pressure so don't cope too well in hot weather! Hope you're coping too.