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Downburst

An a abundance Of fruited gifts from heaven On the market floor

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Date: 5/31/2009 12:24:00 PM

I like the interesting perspective in this poem. The title compliments the piece. Good one! Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Have a wonderul day! Karen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/18/2009 4:54:00 PM

yup..waste not ..want not..nice haiku! Light & Love

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/18/2009 8:03:00 AM

I can see all the bursts of colors beaming from this very creative Haiku!

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/18/2009 6:38:00 AM

This is so different! It would usually be me to make a whole display of fruit or veggies tumble down! So clumsy I am! : ) Great haiku! Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 5/18/2009 12:24:00 AM

A shrewd observation Laura.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/17/2009 8:27:00 PM

This is an awesome write. Very creative. I love the second line. The message to be thankful is all throughout this write. Smiles from Lolita

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/17/2009 1:47:00 PM

This one has me thinking dear lady...line two is magical...a lot of thought my friend in this write...well done.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/17/2009 12:56:00 PM

Laura, What an insight. God gives us so much, but often His gifts go unrecognized. Great write! Love, Dane

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/17/2009 11:59:00 AM

Wow! I can just see a busy market and all of the fruits around. It's amazing how, in the right places, that man and nature can live together. This is truly gifts from heaven. Thanks for the comment Laura. Nate