Downburst

An a abundance
Of fruited gifts from heaven
On the market floor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 31, 2009 at 12:24 PM
I like the interesting perspective in this poem. The title compliments the piece. Good one! Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Have a wonderul day! Karen
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May 18, 2009 at 4:54 PM
yup..waste not ..want not..nice haiku! Light & Love
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May 18, 2009 at 8:03 AM
I can see all the bursts of colors beaming from this very creative Haiku!
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May 18, 2009 at 6:38 AM
This is so different! It would usually be me to make a whole display of fruit or veggies tumble down! So clumsy I am! : ) Great haiku! Love, Shar
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May 18, 2009 at 12:24 AM
A shrewd observation Laura.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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May 17, 2009 at 8:27 PM
This is an awesome write. Very creative. I love the second line. The message to be thankful is all throughout this write. Smiles from Lolita
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May 17, 2009 at 1:47 PM
This one has me thinking dear lady...line two is magical...a lot of thought my friend in this write...well done.
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May 17, 2009 at 12:56 PM
Laura, What an insight. God gives us so much, but often His gifts go unrecognized. Great write! Love, Dane
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May 17, 2009 at 11:59 AM
Wow! I can just see a busy market and all of the fruits around. It's amazing how, in the right places, that man and nature can live together. This is truly gifts from heaven. Thanks for the comment Laura. Nate
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