Down the Primrose Path

Sway my heart in your reveling sight
Waltz your way in the dream of night
But beware of the dancing neon signs
What lures you in is the curse of plight

There’s a crafty face on devil’s door
And a mighty beast is howling a roar
There’s happy smile on clamor of yore
And a disguise waiting to settle a score

Some that glitter aren’t gemstones
Some that sparkle are spurious clones
Look closer for their impish tone
Don’t get fooled by the looks alone

When you’re thirsty looking for water
Don’t be duped by the optical illusion
As you totter in the midst of a desert
A mirage will never quench your thirst

Pleasure’s written on the bottle of gin
Drink a little and you will happily grin
But your head will spin if you dip in sin
Down the primrose path you’ll never win

There’s a crafty face on devil’s door
And a mighty beast is howling a roar
There’s happy smile on clamor of yore
And a disguise waiting to settle a score

February 5, 2020
Placed 1st: Pick a title, vol. 13, lyric poetry contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Down the primrose path
Placed 3rd: Strand select L contest by Brian Strand
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Crabtree Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:43 PM
"a crafty face on devil's door"... Perfectly put, Vijay.
Ibeh Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 4:06 PM
Please forgive me for commenting on this gem 4 months late! I was sick as a dog when I judged this contest, lol Great poem, Vijay:-)
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 11:51 AM
Congrats on your worthy win. VIjay
Delaney Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 2:04 PM
Congratulations Vijay: Your warnings are wise and wonderfully expressed.SuZ
Pandit Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 3:55 PM
Much appreciate SuZ--many thanks.
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 1:10 PM
- A beautiful poem, Vijay :) - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 4:07 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate.
Roper Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 4:56 PM
Enchantment can sway, but like the apple of Eden can be sinful. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Pandit Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 8:57 AM
Thank you Eve--much appreciate.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 1:17 PM
Smoothly and beautifully composed is this message of warning Vijay! A wonderful entry! xxoo
Pandit Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 8:57 AM
Much appreciate Connie--many thanks.
Y. Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 3:16 PM
WoW! Vijay, You have penned some powerful lyrics! Just because it looks good, doesn’t mean that it is. Excellent job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day my friend:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 3:32 PM
Much appreciate the kind remarks, Alexis--many thanks.
Callus Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 8:19 AM
Excellent, Vijay. All that glitters is not gold... external appearance can be deceitful. Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 8:47 AM
Much appreciate Paul--many thanks.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 11:22 AM
How could we be an easy prey for our illusions and whims!? A message of great value presented to the reader in a so wonderful work of Art! Both, thoughts and artistry are displayed eloquently! Reading up to a poetry of depth and wonderment is the epitome of Beauty! Always an immense pleasure reading your poetry, dear Vijay.. definitely a FAV! Deepest regards and blessings.
Pandit Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 2:58 PM
Much appreciate your comments, Besma--always a pleasure to read. Many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE. Regards.
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 6:02 PM
you approached the theme magnificinetly, Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 6:24 AM
Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.
Devonshire Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 2:40 PM
Those things that glitter and attract us are not always good, Vijay. We are duped into thinking illusions can help us. A profound and compelling poem! Hugs, Carolyn
Pandit Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 4:11 PM
Yes indeed--illusions guide us into a wrong path. Much appreciate your visit and comments my friend--many thanks, Carolyn.
Sands Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 12:39 PM
Wow, this is written so well, smooth and flowing ! Great one Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 2:07 PM
Much appreciate the kind remarks--many thanks, Heidi.
Sathasivam Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 10:03 AM
Yes, so true. Well penned . Lovely poem
Pandit Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 2:06 PM
Thank you Ravi--much appreciate.
Canerdy Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 7:43 AM
It would be too hard to pick favorites lines. They are all so good, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 2:06 PM
Much appreciate the kind remarks--many thanks, Janice.
Somadas Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 12:20 AM
A mirage will never quench your thirst.. captivating lines.. Beautiful rhymes.. You are teaching me how to write a Lyric.. Great entry in the contest Vijay.. Good luck..
Pandit Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 7:11 AM
Thank you Jenish--much appreciate.
Nicole Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 10:15 PM
Some are not who they say they are. It is easy to be fooled. Always be careful. "Down the primrose path you’ll never win" You are right my dear friend. ~ Brandy
Pandit Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 7:10 AM
Some are illusions--much appreciate Brandy--many thanks.
Kiser Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 12:49 PM
You never know, pay attention. Good luck in the contest.
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 2:30 PM
Thank you MLK--much appreciate.
Adams Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 10:55 AM
you did a great job with that line, dark for you but definitely has a wonderful flow to it... enjoyed this one, I am sure it will be on the winner's list... best wishes in the contest... hugs
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 2:29 PM
So wonderful to read your comments--much appreciate, sandy--many thanks.
Rose  Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 10:52 AM
I think I will stay away from the primrose path, lol, its sounds evil, better stick to roses. xo
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 2:28 PM
Some paths are not worth exploring. Much appreciate, Pixie--many thanks.
Proxenos Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 10:24 AM
So true, we must never be tricked by the crafty face on devils door, or pleasures written on the bottle of gin, tempting us of pleasures within - a deep thoughtful write - message and meaning rife within this gem. Blessings, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 2:27 PM
So very kind of you Jennifer--much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks.
Cunningham Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 9:16 AM
Flows seamlessly Vijay, one path I won't be walking down. Well written and good luck. Tom
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 2:27 PM
Me either--much appreciate Tom--many thanks.
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