Notes About The Poem

- Down the Primrose Path -

Feel gaiety ...
the energy
Rest a little ...
watch and listen
Follow the path
a cradle ...
of flowers ...
Oh my ...
Primrose Crown

The old table
with injuries
and weaknesses
invites to dinner ...
The finest porcelain
beautiful crystal glass
kissed by your lips
Oh my ...
Primrose Beads

Not alone ...
the dear buds ...
fullness to women's skin
fertility ...
harmony ...
uncovered ...
emotional experiences
Oh my ...
Primrose Jewel 








01/02 - 2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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3. Down The Primrose Path
4th place in the contest
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Pandit Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 4:10 PM
Congrats Anne Lise, on this winning poem!
Andresen Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 1:49 PM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 5:46 PM
Sunshine, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 1:36 PM
- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 11:12 AM
I love your perspective of walking down a Primrose path dear friend. Your imagination is fertile just as the flowers down the path. I love the awesome way you express yourself dear Soul sister, so beautiful, so dainty, so feminine. Best of luck in the contest Sunshine Smile. Hugs an blessings, Jenny.
Andresen Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 12:26 PM
- Many thanks for the supportive and lovely comment, dear friend Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 6:26 AM
A superb interpretation of the theme, such wonderful imagery anne-lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 6:22 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Neumann Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 4:25 AM
Wow. I like that, Kai
Andresen Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 6:21 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Theraven Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 5:24 PM
Anne-Lise, Lovely path you've created in this poem with a kiss. -Richard
Andresen Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 6:21 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 1:04 PM
A lovely lyric full of imagery...
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 1:06 PM
- I don't know if the lyrics are right ... - I let it go ... thank you very much, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 5:22 AM
An outstanding description of beauty in lyric form dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 1:08 PM
- Lyric or not ... I'm not sure, but glad you like it - Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 7:53 PM
A-L i enjoyed reading your poem. I especially liked the second verse. That photo looks like some of the paths I wander:)
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 1:01 PM
- Many thanks, glad you enjoyed it Daniel :) - Nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 4:41 PM
A beautiful lyric Anne, well written. Good luck Tom
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 7:20 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 4:07 PM
this is beautiful Anne-Lise... your words bring life to that photo wonderfully... best wishes in the contest... hugs
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 7:20 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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