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You're oblivious to reality like a butterfly flying so carefree you walk with a smile and seem unaware of the pain, you leave it’s like I’m not there. You keep your eyes shut for within your dreams ignorance is bliss and you hear no screams as you seek rainbows in a veil of tears playing deaf and dumb or so it appears. Feigning innocence and acting naive your treatment of me is hard to believe so skip right along down the primrose path while I scrape you off soaking in a bath. (Lyric) 01/29/2020

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Date: 2/12/2020 1:17:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Emile :) - Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/12/2020 1:31:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/11/2020 5:30:00 PM
Well written verse, Emile. Yes blinders are used so, not to see their own doings and faults. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/12/2020 8:31:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/29/2020 12:21:00 PM
Fantastic write Emile;-)
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Date: 1/29/2020 2:40:00 PM
Thank you Keith, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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