Down For the Count

A boxer in the ring may think
He’s getting all the breaks;
Then bam! he’s down, for just like that,
One punch is all it takes.

I know exactly how he feels
For suddenly, today,
Whatever energy I had
Quite quickly drained away.

It happened as I headed home
From taking in a movie.
The walk was twenty-seven blocks,
But I was feeling groovy.

The last few streets seemed very long
And man, I sure was sweating.
I hoped that it was not the flu
That somehow I was getting.

I made it home and hit the couch
And fell into a sleep;
My dinner plans for later on
I knew I couldn’t keep.

Whatever hit me, from left field,
Was surely tantamount
To reeling from a punch that sent me
Flat out for the count.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horsman Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 11:07 PM
Still love this ilene, somehow seems to relate to today more than anything,,Just checking out my favourite poems...Please Stay safe...
Bauer Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 4:33 AM
Wow, Harry! Thank you for reminding me of this poem, which sure does relate to today, though that was an ordinary flu. Stay safe yourself - let’s hope that none of us (or anyone else!) has to succumb to this current scourge...
Zerbst Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 9:15 AM
Perfect rhythm! You even have some long words in there that can be hard to place. Describing your feelings on the page comes natural to you.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 9:11 AM
Using a boxer's dilemma to describe your own feelings of total exhaustion is brilliant! Your flow and rhyming are excellent as always. Well done Ilene!! Best wishes, Keith
Horsman Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 4:43 AM
take a real life situation, and girl don't you bring it on home to the reader... this is wonderful ilene, i felt i was there in the poem with you it was so visual,, this poem has just walked it way in to my fav... you are gem,,,, oh and by the way,, i hope you are feeling better....
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