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Down Deep

Living all alone Like a sunken vessel Down deep

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Neva Romaine

Date: 8/7/2014 2:44:00 PM

Hey Terrell, congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Just want to say though - you're not really alone - we are here with you. Neva

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/6/2014 9:31:00 PM

Terrell,, Congratulations!!! :) On having your poem featured this week. Stopping by to say hi, and greet almost every poem, on the Poetry Soup's home page. Enjoy having your poem for all to read. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Race Benoit

Date: 8/6/2014 1:24:00 PM

I prefer my senryu's in a 5-7-5 count, but i couldn't pass this up because you speak my language. I too, live alone in the marrow of "down deep."

Daver Austin

Date: 8/4/2014 9:57:00 AM

This one certainly speaks volumes about loneliness. It's what I like about Haiku - the reader is left space to use imagination. Congrats on the selection. daver

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/14/2011 9:06:00 PM

Lovely haiku with meaningful images