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Down Deep


Living all alone
Like a sunken vessel
Down deep

sadhaiku

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Neva Romaine

August 7, 2014 at 2:44 PM

Hey Terrell, congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Just want to say though - you're not really alone - we are here with you. Neva

Poet Destroyer A

August 6, 2014 at 9:31 PM

Terrell,, Congratulations!!! :) On having your poem featured this week. Stopping by to say hi, and greet almost every poem, on the Poetry Soup's home page. Enjoy having your poem for all to read. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Race Benoit

August 6, 2014 at 1:24 PM

I prefer my senryu's in a 5-7-5 count, but i couldn't pass this up because you speak my language. I too, live alone in the marrow of "down deep."

Daver Austin

August 4, 2014 at 9:57 AM

This one certainly speaks volumes about loneliness. It's what I like about Haiku - the reader is left space to use imagination. Congrats on the selection. daver