Down

I'm down to the earth I can't even breathe up to my chest I'm brimmed by alcoholic chest My life is filled with miserable strength. No one gat my back No one to hold my arms My thought of empty sack No one to fill it with germs. She left me all alone For a man I barely know She's always picking up the phone But gives me another tone I'm down to the earth Like I'm a fool for the best I love her to the end But I'm a waste to her thirst.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/22/2024 4:19:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.