Dove Love

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When xerography yesterday's youthful gynecoiD I'll wear my *multipurpose Mexican sunny sombrerO* *Somehow, someway* I'll do suitable improV And not be one who is cooperativE *Sweet spirit super *(dove) fits my heart as a (glove) areaL Spiritual enough not to speak (aloud)all that (proud) ballyhoO Definitely earnestly forever guardsman against perV Let my spirit forever be uncompromisablE Written: September 28, 2022 Sponsor: Joseph May Contest: The "A's" Have It Nonsensical, I know. LOL..I think I got all the requirements in there. I am speaking about what I would call gynecoid of generations of unborn babies.

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Joseph May

Date: 10/2/2022 5:25:00 AM

Congrats on your win Sara, Nicely penned

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/2/2022 1:04:00 PM

Joseph, Thanks for dropping by and letting me know that I placed in your contest. I am honored to be on the list. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/29/2022 10:08:00 AM

You wrote a wonderful poem, knowing the rules are very difficult.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/29/2022 1:30:00 PM

Thank you, Victor. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/29/2022 9:44:00 AM

That fascinating writing, Sara! beautiful visual and tremendous willingness thanks to you. Best wishes for the contest.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/29/2022 1:23:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the kind review. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 9/29/2022 12:48:00 AM

Interesting spiritual verse, Sara, I've not written anything for it, I'm confused what to write here of late. Good luck

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/29/2022 4:25:00 AM

Eve, This one had so many requirements until it was almost impossible to write. I know it is not what will win but I was going to try to write it anyway. Your visit is uplifting. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/28/2022 3:16:00 PM

An interesting write, Sara! I suppose it could be called an acrostic. What was your inspiration? Love the pic!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/29/2022 5:00:00 AM

The sweet unborn, the abandoned, the murdered…oh God have mercy! To be so injured upon entry into this world. Like docs say, broken bones grow back stronger and so I pray strength for this dear survivor.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/28/2022 5:50:00 PM

Kim, He wanted it listed as verse. LOL..It was not easy to write for sure especially with the title that I chose. My inspiration was my thoughts about a child who was just born, a video online I saw about 9 months old baby girl who was left in a storage shed at a couple's home. Their dog alerted them to something wrong, they found the baby, called 911, they took the baby for help, it had bruises all over it, a broken limb but was fine after the care that it got. Its father put it in the shed and he was charged with abandonment of a child and abuse. The couple had cameras all over so that is how he was caught. Plus, abortion on demand. Sara