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Doubts

Doubts..... Some doubts rule my mind It blocks my foresight It doesn’t allow me to reach my heights It dims my imaginary sight But it gives me the power to fight And just rise like the bright light Maybe it gives me fright But it also made me think right And that’s why getting doubts is fine.

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 3/3/2018 7:37:00 AM

A very beautiful poem with a nice message, you are right, we shouldn t always remain positive and think that we ll succeed,we should think things from all perspective otherwise if you don t have a backup plan you can find yourself in a very difficult situation plus if you think that you ll succeed and gettig failed willreally hurt you so thinking negative isn t bad, doubts helps us from takig right decisions, good luck

Aishwaryaa Saraswati
Date: 3/6/2018 7:02:00 AM

Thank you!

Aishwarya Vr

Date: 2/24/2018 12:16:00 AM

Nice rhyme with those catchy lines. I really liked it.

Aishwaryaa Saraswati
Date: 3/6/2018 7:02:00 AM

Thank you!