Doubt

Whats the matter love,
You seem to be real stund,
 You didnt think to picture this.
who thought I'd be the one.
 I loved it when you doubted me,
It made me turn so strong.
 What do you see when you look at me.
I see I am the one.
 The one who faught with every step,
to keep my head on straight.
 I pushed and pulled with all my might,
To follow what is right.
 I love when people doubt me.
I't makes me want to fight.
 My mental state is stronger now.
I'll take you on this flight.
 To see your face to see it now, 
Its hardly worth the wait.
 Come face me now you little twit,
I'll show you who is right.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 3, 2011 at 7:12 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Venessa. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol
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