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Doublethink Belief

Doublethink belief, boon or bane
Environ conditions 
Know that map is not the terrain
Narrowness imprisons

Here, now ego decry
Begin, by asking ‘why’
Free like birds, in the sky

Let’s give soul relief
Doublethink belief

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Doublethink belief, we’re reborn
Halfway across the world
Memory erased, beliefs shorn
Yet bubbling joy, unfurled

The same sun shines on all
Hark the divine love call
Manifest as bliss squall

Ego ploy the thief
Doublethink belief

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Doublethink belief, stop thought flow
Stillness ushers deep calm
Once heart mellow, we feel soul glow
God’s touch the healing balm

Each form, Holy Spirit
Judge not fault or merit
Walk path of truth with grit

Let’s turn a new leaf
Doublethink belief

28-November-2021
Triple Quietus 

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Joanna Daniel December 13, 2021 at 5:07 AM Very nicely done, US, you write these so easily:) a simple doubt - if the title is doublethink belief, is it necessary to start the poem with the same phrase (in case of quietus)? Unseeking Seeker December 13, 2021 at 6:36 AM For Quietus form, it is. Title is the refrain taken from the first word or words of the first line, which is also the last line of the poem. However, for the contest underway, all forms are acceptable.

Krish Radhakrishna December 5, 2021 at 1:56 PM Very well written! Not sure I can do this form. I shall try this in my next life! Unseeking Seeker December 5, 2021 at 6:16 PM Hahaha! It is a breeze for you, Krish, I’m sure! For the contest though, you can use any form

Andrea Dietrich December 5, 2021 at 12:13 PM I enjoyed another sample for your contest here. Sure hope I can figure this one out for myself!! Unseeking Seeker December 5, 2021 at 6:16 PM Andrea, you can use any form for the contest, it need not be Quietus. I’ve written a sample in Quatrain too. The idea is to encourage all to separate the wheat from the chaff for God search.

Caren Krutsinger November 30, 2021 at 9:40 PM I wish everyone would "Begin, by asking ‘why’ Free like birds, in the sky" I really do! Unseeking Seeker December 5, 2021 at 6:17 PM True Caren! :)