Double Vision

reflections
in the lake
sky
      moving 
          on the breeze-
                      trees
ripple and
sigh
         mesmorised
         hypnotised
landscape
shadows
          cataract
          my
eye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 11:39 PM
Wow, deep one, Brian. Cataract my eye. What a line!!
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