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Geronimo was one hell of a strong fellow!!!!

I mean that fourteen different ways The heat of summer makes me sway Sami Davis Boy could he play That was yesterday Arthur have you heard? Jean's now that's absurd History always doubles up Sami are you ok? Cause I will delight if I may Should a doctor smile and say Twins!!

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Date: 7/26/2018 8:38:00 AM
Creative lines that you have penned. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 7/22/2018 6:29:00 PM
Hmm, now I read your note about Geronimo. Was this the poem for the expecting contest?
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Date: 7/22/2018 6:28:00 PM
Is this the one you were saying had a surprise? So you wanted twins, huh? I always thought that would be so nice too!! I take it you got a baby girl!!
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Date: 7/22/2018 12:57:00 AM
Sami is also happy it were not twins :D
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Date: 7/21/2018 11:14:00 PM
Art.. you create humor with brilliance, what a gift!
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Date: 7/21/2018 3:01:00 PM
LOL Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/21/2018 6:43:00 AM
Do you have any gum?
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