Double Haiku (I Think)

I can’t keep in mind,
things immediately past.
Vapors, in a flash.

But I can narrate,
who, where, when and what I did
forty years ago!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 23, 2014 at 4:53 AM
It happens to all of us. I remember in detail things that happened twenty years ago but can't remember where I put my car keys twenty minutes ago
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May 22, 2014 at 11:16 AM
John,, Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Hope you are enjoying the exposure. Hugs & Love ~SKAT~
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April 9, 2010 at 11:20 AM
John, It is amazing how that happens...Thanks for the comments on my work...Yes C,D,E are natural and a sharp is followed by a flat..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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