Double Haiku

love is in the air
gifts of love seen everywhere
lonely heart sulking


a heart beating fast
wishing for a valentine
tears line lonely eyes


This day of love
Gave me scary wounds
I just ask you, why me? 




for pd's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Orozco Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 9:12 PM
This is amazing poetry.
Barq Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 5:14 AM
Amazing compound of pain and precedence, Good work.... Loved it
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 8:57 PM
this is really nice. congrats for your win. a sad one but I really enjoyed it.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 7:50 AM
You did good, I especially like the Questionku, congrats!
Veetil Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 2:34 AM
congratulations on your win...
A   Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 1:58 PM
IRFANA, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 1:18 PM
oh these are sad Irfana but very good xx
Lamoureux Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 12:00 PM
This is very good! I enjoyed your poem.
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