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Double Edge

Sword’s sharp edge attached side by side One side a victor Another side a villain The sworn enemies, the bosom friends And the sharp tongue between clinched teeth With the paired edges that cuts both At one end, wisdom of wits While the other end unleashes the evil spirits The life that is full of shows and shadows The stride to strive towards a big ride And the cruel hands of death at the offing To be or not be Time that rushes like a tide One time, you are young and active Another time, old and passive One time walk tall and other stupors The law with the sharp jaw that can bite both One slit, confirm the crime Another, confirm not the crime To celebrate or celebrate not And the love along the thin broken line full of tinges One good trudge, hero Another misstep, hate Like matrimony hanging at balance The torrent of punches to roll with And the quest to be at par And the hasty retreats, the quips and sound bites Sometimes lemon to have lemonade or honey that maketh money

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/3/2016 7:56:00 PM
Enjoyed
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Date: 6/5/2015 7:26:00 AM
Nice Piece of work...love it.
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Date: 7/27/2014 12:17:00 PM
a step at time Ahmed, your first step is strong and steady, very vivid illustrations in this piece, keep that up, keep trudging on through this road of poetry. you will never be disappointed.
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Date: 6/16/2012 8:29:00 AM
Habari Abdi, karibu poetrysoup! Victor and villain rounded up in one - that's what life is all about. Conflicts, struggles and a search for balance.
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Date: 3/23/2012 7:04:00 AM
I am stopping back today to see if you have continued to write and post new poetry Ahmed. I hope that you will continue with your writing. You have taken the first step~ ~to write and share. When you feel the need for inspiration read some of the other poetry here at PoetrySoup. It will help you. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2012 5:00:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ahmed. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/12/2012 1:42:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup --- this is a powerful poem. I enjoyed reading it today. Always, Laura
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