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I'll begin my dot-to-dot journey at first light when dawn paints the sky after darkness of night. Dots like stars on the horizon will be pearlescent hues all interlaced with shades of pastel lavenders and blues. From that mark my tracing would take me aloft to view the sea whose waves are curled and coifed. A ribbon of specks then bounces from beach to beach, where upon sandy shores the sea's fingers flow to reach. To granite cliff tops my next dots would climb where I'd walk in heathered meadows for a time. Each step a new spot where my dotted tracings align. The next ones will lead me to an evergreen forest of pine. On soft pine needles, several dots will outline a bed, and four more to make a soft pillow for my weary head. I'll laze for a while, drawing more dots from flower to flower until I travel along on the pixeled road for hour beyond hour. My journey will be unscripted. The dots will have no plot. They will ramble and scramble to wherever I choose to trot. Inside a starting gate of horses, ready to race on a dirt track. On and on I'll draw dots and never once bothering to look back. More dots will I need as soon as the moon appears, for not being able to reach her fills my heart with fears. I'll stipple many pinpoints from moonbeam to moonbeam, then follow with more of them from stars with a silvery gleam. From morning's pale horizon, onto midnight's crest, I'll make my way through the day then stop for a rest to plan an alternate route to bring me back home again. One that takes me winding through clouds and a gentle rain. November 15, 2022 Dot to Dot Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 12/24/2022 12:04:00 AM
Excellent, well done, congratulations
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Date: 12/22/2022 11:47:00 PM
Beautifully done. So creative and wise. Love it. God bless you always and Congrats. Love, Gina
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Date: 12/22/2022 2:44:00 PM
You have us following your dot to dots through wonderful imagery, Jenna! Congratulations on 1st place in my contest!
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Date: 11/19/2022 8:29:00 PM
Jenna! Certainly took me long enough to come across your marvelous writing talent, but accidents can be rewarding (tho I don’t believe in accidents). Anyway, I Really enjoyed this poem. Am putting you on my follow list. Exceptional imagery and inventive imagination. A gift to find your work. Will read more! sally
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Date: 11/16/2022 7:46:00 AM
Nice little journey, Jenna. I enjoyed this
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/16/2022 5:37:00 PM
Thanks for the comments, Jeff.
Date: 11/15/2022 7:31:00 PM
Wow! That's quite an amazing journey, Jenna:)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/16/2022 6:36:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jo. I'm glad you took it with me.
Date: 11/15/2022 6:31:00 PM
All dots lead to the winner's circle, JL. Another gem. ;o)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/16/2022 6:35:00 AM
We shall see if my dots connect with what the sponsor had in mind for the contest theme. If not, Arlo, I really appreciate your support. Thank you.
Date: 11/15/2022 2:26:00 PM
Superb imagery on your dot to dot journey Jenna, you rose well to the challenge of the contest. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/15/2022 2:35:00 PM
Thank you very much for seeing the imagery I tried to portray, Tom.
Date: 11/15/2022 1:38:00 PM
Absolutely delightful trek through a dot-to-dot adventure, and when you have them connected, you have produced a linear universe both to be explored and colored. Nice, excellent work, Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/15/2022 2:34:00 PM
Thank you ever so much for your supportive thoughts, Milt.
Date: 11/15/2022 12:28:00 PM
Brilliant Jenna, I don’t think there’s any dots left, you’ve joined them all, and created quite a picture for the reader, a big contender for the contest, best of luck, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/15/2022 12:38:00 PM
I think I'd better find a way to make enough to get back home before my pen runs out of ink! Thanks for the well wishes and your great comments, David.
Date: 11/15/2022 12:19:00 PM
- A wonderful journey from dot to dot, Jenna - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/15/2022 12:37:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise and thank you for reading my dotted journey.

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