Jen H. Poet Couplet

Dot Dot Dot

dot dot dot
you love me, you love me not
yeah i get it, we are kids
life is kind of like mad libs
but i just can't stand this all
my life with you has finally completed the fall
i want to be your friend
but the relationship part, has come to an end
if you still like me that way
then there is nothing else to say
i will have to leave your life
this too will cut me like a knife
but until you are over me
i will have to watch and see
so i'm sorry but please make up your mind
while all my thoughts i try to find
dot dot dot
i was in your life, maybe now i'm not

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Carolyn Devonshire February 14, 2009 at 11:46 AM Oh, Jen, how sad it is that love can "cut me like a knife." Put aside your pain today and reach out to one who deserves you. Now write something uplifting so I don't have to cry on Valentine's Day. Carolyn

Lawrence Ingle February 9, 2009 at 12:33 AM Remember there's always more fish in the sea..Nice writing...Lawrence in Lou. Ky.

Michael Jordan February 7, 2009 at 7:50 PM Well Jen hopefully the friendship will last - God Bless, MJ