DORMANT DESIRES

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Anisha Dutta.

06/02/25

Choosse a line 3

Contest by Joseph May

Seeds of desires were sown as our glances met. Emotive urge started to flow though hidden yet. Wobbled heart got confused to manifest. No way ! Shy silent love to hesitate. Not sure, whether you will reciprocate ! Better, you might approach, I’ll watch and wait. But I chose you as king of my little empire. My passion was piercing me to ignite fire. Unable to express myself, but I’m sincere. I won’t suppress ardent ardour more, it’s clear. I must drive away clouds of dilemma entire. “The clouds parted like the pursed lips of desire.”

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A comment has not been posted for this poem. Encourage a poet by being the first to comment.