Doris Is Home

Doris is home
Oh! her throat is sore
Really feeling tired and wore
I want to sleep and rest
So just let me be quiet no jest!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/17/2010 7:40:00 PM
I am fixin' to lay down and rest...the pain pills are kicking in. Seems that the pain in my arms is better now I just have to get over the surgery pain...hopefully after a week or so! I look like someone beat me up I am bruised every where!
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Date: 7/17/2010 8:13:00 AM
Oh poor Doris, hope she is feeling better soon! Yes I agree with David, Stepsils are the best (I always loved the red ones!!!!). When living abroad, Strepsils were the best medicine for a sore throat. A funny thing is that I cannot buy them here on the German side, but after one kilometer walk I can buy them cheaply at a Polish service station. ..Thank you Sara for commenting Wild Cat! Have a look at my facebook albums. I added some new pics....Gert
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Date: 7/16/2010 8:55:00 PM
Poor Doris ..hope she is feeling better soon.. sore throats are the worst.. hope u are well to as your poetry is quite grand Sara.. enjoyed.. happy weekend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/16/2010 6:08:00 PM
just take a strepsil!
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Date: 7/16/2010 5:40:00 PM
Cute one. Do you two share a house together?
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Date: 7/16/2010 2:27:00 PM
Ms. Sara, Nice to hear from you again. It seems I can always relate your words. I get escape reality and go back in time. Yea, I'm the underdog today, but tomorrow things may change. I've been through a whole mess of things that most people don't go through. So its probably hard for most to relate or even have a clue what i'm really Im really talking about. Maybe I'll never know. Enjoy the weekend!! Thanks for the feed back
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