Doors and Jars

The doors a jar,
Ha! Ha!
How can that be
It can't you see
Doors made from wood,
Solid and sturdy and should
Not shatter with force.
If the door is a jar
Ha! Ha!
This comment has gone too far,
Because a door will always be a door,
And a Jar a Jar
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Krutsinger Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 3:39 AM
Your ending can be sung, and it made me happy!
Hawkins Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 7:35 PM
That's Good.
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