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Doors and Jars

The doors a jar, Ha! Ha! How can that be It can't you see Doors made from wood, Solid and sturdy and should Not shatter with force. If the door is a jar Ha! Ha! This comment has gone too far, Because a door will always be a door, And a Jar a Jar

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Date: 9/7/2021 3:39:00 AM
Your ending can be sung, and it made me happy!
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 9/8/2021 7:35:00 PM
That's Good.

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