Door

Highway sliced
Geometrically whispered
Into your eyes
Silks down through your mind
A limpid sighted magic spell
Fibonacci’s stepping repelled

Bilateral storm
Trapped by duty
And boxed voids
That familiar smell:
Skyscraping cylinders
And footnotes

It zips aside
High-toned warning
Like elder numbers rhyming

Prepare for abstract cosmovision
Liquid language gasified into strings
Softly spoken touch
Of the sunset mist
Morphing everything
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 30, 2009 at 3:12 PM
i read it repeatedly felt magnetize. simply phenomenal. thanks cheers
Hensley Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 4:52 PM
A wondering poem you have written! i agree with sajdah al-riyami!
Winter Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 7:40 AM
Wow. And I must agree that last verse is killer awesome. Love, Shar
Al-Riyami Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 7:03 AM
The structure of this poem is Freakin' Beautiful.Yew dont usually read me saying Freakin' So TOPS!.You:have to listen to this song called"Let The drummer Kick" by The Citizen Cope.Your poetry is similiar to this song.Please*.*
Brown Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 6:49 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Cesar. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
Higgins Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 4:34 PM
Awesome writing brother man..
Chircop Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 3:02 PM
wow,this is wow,i love the way you combined this and it flows sweetly to the reader,i can reread again and again--charma
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