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Door

Highway sliced
Geometrically whispered
Into your eyes
Silks down through your mind
A limpid sighted magic spell
Fibonacci’s stepping repelled

Bilateral storm
Trapped by duty
And boxed voids
That familiar smell:
Skyscraping cylinders
And footnotes

It zips aside
High-toned warning
Like elder numbers rhyming

Prepare for abstract cosmovision
Liquid language gasified into strings
Softly spoken touch
Of the sunset mist
Morphing everything

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/30/2009 3:12:00 PM
i read it repeatedly felt magnetize. simply phenomenal. thanks cheers
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Date: 5/27/2009 4:52:00 PM
A wondering poem you have written! i agree with sajdah al-riyami!
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Date: 5/26/2009 7:40:00 AM
Wow. And I must agree that last verse is killer awesome. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/26/2009 7:03:00 AM
The structure of this poem is Freakin' Beautiful.Yew dont usually read me saying Freakin' So TOPS!.You:have to listen to this song called"Let The drummer Kick" by The Citizen Cope.Your poetry is similiar to this song.Please*.*
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Date: 5/26/2009 6:49:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Cesar. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2009 4:34:00 PM
Awesome writing brother man..
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Date: 5/25/2009 3:02:00 PM
wow,this is wow,i love the way you combined this and it flows sweetly to the reader,i can reread again and again--charma
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