Don'T Worry

dont stop me
i'm on a journey
across the field and creek
to Kristi's house
don't call me
I'll call you when I get there
promise?
don't bother me
I'm packing up my bag
with stuff to take over
I have a movie
and some candy
I don't know what she's got
dont worry
Red will see me to the edge of the yard
and I bet
he'll be there
when I'm coming home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 8:33 PM
Don't worry! this is great!! Thank you for your kind comments on my work, always appreciated.
Lopez Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 11:44 AM
An adventurous feel.......very eventful .........great job!
Strand Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 1:07 AM
Lovely vignette Veronica.Thank you for your encouragement today.It made my day.Rgds brian.Have a good weekend.
Kendrick Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 4:26 PM
I enjoyed your writing. I bet Red is the dog. Sara
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