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Don'T Worry

dont stop me i'm on a journey across the field and creek to Kristi's house don't call me I'll call you when I get there promise? don't bother me I'm packing up my bag with stuff to take over I have a movie and some candy I don't know what she's got dont worry Red will see me to the edge of the yard and I bet he'll be there when I'm coming home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/15/2009 8:33:00 PM
Don't worry! this is great!! Thank you for your kind comments on my work, always appreciated.
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Date: 7/11/2009 11:44:00 AM
An adventurous feel.......very eventful .........great job!
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Date: 7/11/2009 1:07:00 AM
Lovely vignette Veronica.Thank you for your encouragement today.It made my day.Rgds brian.Have a good weekend.
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Date: 7/10/2009 4:26:00 PM
I enjoyed your writing. I bet Red is the dog. Sara
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