Don'T Travel Downwards!

To have too much pride
It can be a deadly ride!

It's the thing God really hates
Might wind up in hell's gates!

So if you want to love the Lord
Too much of it you can not afford

Do one's best to obey
Although we are just jars of clay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 18, 2010 at 7:30 PM
Beautiful words in praise of God with the most striking truth that 'To have too much Pride, Can be a deadly ride.' Great write my PS friend. Love and best wishes......Ravindra.......Joshua Lacey.
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