Jonathan Thornton Poet Rhyme

Don'T Slip Away

I can remember
When our love was strong
I always thought
Nothing could go wrong
How wrong I was
That I cried
I wanted nothing more
Then to have you by my side.

   I don't want to lose you
   You mean too much to me
   Even just as friends
   I want you can't you see

After all this pain
I still love you so
You say you slipped away
That I don't know
What I do know is


   I don't want to lose you
   You mean too much to me
   Even just as friends
   I want you can't you see

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Cory Long November 25, 2011 at 1:47 PM this was very good keep it up. cory

Morgan Corthell November 25, 2011 at 1:46 PM i liked your poem buti think you should change it from freeversr to rhyme. all in all i realy liked your poem.it reminded me of dear john Jonathan Thornton November 25, 2011 at 2:00 PM Thanks. - I made the change