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Don'T Slip Away

I can remember When our love was strong I always thought Nothing could go wrong How wrong I was That I cried I wanted nothing more Then to have you by my side. I don't want to lose you You mean too much to me Even just as friends I want you can't you see After all this pain I still love you so You say you slipped away That I don't know What I do know is I don't want to lose you You mean too much to me Even just as friends I want you can't you see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/25/2011 1:47:00 PM
this was very good keep it up. cory
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Date: 11/25/2011 1:46:00 PM
i liked your poem buti think you should change it from freeversr to rhyme. all in all i realy liked your poem.it reminded me of dear john
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Jonathan Thornton
Date: 11/25/2011 2:00:00 PM
Thanks. - I made the change

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