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Don't Make Me Wait

In the bottom of the ocean Is where my heart lies Abide by my side, my devotion Is lost in the crowd of gals and guys Don't make me wait my turn to receive rationality Don't make me wait my turn to grieve my long lost sanity Get out of the way, stay away from the hideous, Yet beautiful lies in my heart...we're not on the same bumpy, rowdy bus Graze in your own maze... Quit your daydreaming gaze! Look into my teary, weary eyes They glisten in truth and not of lies Hear our nearly hushed cries... Dona nobis pachem We whisper our last goodbyes... Oh please...save them... Ooooh ooooh ooooh Don't make Don't make me wait Don't make me wait for you to shine my direction You had my spirits ascend with utmost affection Ooooh ooooh ooooh Subside from my side, Negativity long and wide Like the river ever-flowing Like the veins overflowing With liquid of lamentation Shedding blood of resentment, giving me silent but deadly sensation Qin edoba ou liha tojhil... Qin edoba ou liha tojhil... (You abide in the light) A-a-and my heart is beating with hesitation Believe in me while I go on my own and once I'm out there, there's no turning back in this independent zone You made me wait with frustration... Postpone the sentiments of alone for a time and answer your ringing phone I know you meant no harm Karma will get you back, so be aware You will grow cold and I'll be warm Mama, what kind of wisdom would you care to share? Ooooh ooooh ooooh Don't make Don't make me wait Don't make me wait for you to shine my direction You had my spirits ascend with utmost affection Ooooh ooooh ooooh Subside from my side, Negativity long and wide Like the river ever-flowing Like the veins overflowing With liquid of lamentation Shedding blood of resentment, giving me silent but deadly sensation Qin edoba ou liha tojhil... Qin edoba ou liha tojhil... (You abide in the light) Like a Phoenix, I rise up from the ashes of my past Your beautiful tune mended the Earth with exquisite mirth Like a runner, I'm running forward to the finish line oh so fast You're a butterfly, wrapped in her cocoon...you're more than what you think you're worth I'll wait my turn to see what's on the other side I'll wait my turn to find a secluded cave to hide Solitude is echoing my name in the mountains of majestic wonders The attitude of gratitude, reject me not during tribulation and hardship, for my mind endlessly ponders What it's like after death when all the dead will rise I heard life's a journey that has so much to offer according to the wise Ooooh ooooh ooooh Don't make Don't make me wait Don't make me wait for you to shine my direction You had my spirits ascend with utmost affection Ooooh ooooh ooooh Subside from my side, Negativity long and wide Like the river ever-flowing Like the veins overflowing With liquid of lamentation Shedding blood of resentment, giving me silent but deadly sensation Qin edoba ou liha tojhil... Qin edoba ou liha tojhil... (You abide in the light) If we learned to forgive the past, The future will show us the path of painless happiness Burn away our dismay, so we won't be downcast Still scattered on the floor like shards of shame...that leaves me with little to no success Forgive the past and remember that you're not a waste of space Forgive the future and let your regrets flee from your presence Forgive the present and embrace the passion of your heart that's overflowing with grace Forgive the past, present and future, then you can seek repentance Ooooh ooooh ooooh Don't make Don't make me wait Don't make me wait for you to shine my direction You had my spirits ascend with utmost affection Ooooh ooooh ooooh Subside from my side, Negativity long and wide Like the river ever-flowing Like the veins overflowing With liquid of lamentation Shedding blood of resentment, giving me silent but deadly sensation Qin edoba ou liha tojhil... Qin edoba ou liha tojhil... (You abide in the light) I heard a tap at my window... I expected your face to appear when I opened it ajar Instead, the wind of sorrow... Decided to blow to and fro and I've been chilled to the bone so far Don't turn the cold shoulder... The gloomy room of doom becomes colder No matter what, I will love you even when you grow older I will keep you like a memory folder in my brain...I'll think more clearly and bolder Maybe I shoulda told her... My future's a mighty blur Maybe I shoulda told her... Ooooh ooooh ooooh Don't make Don't make me wait Don't make me wait for you to shine my direction You had my spirits ascend with utmost affection Ooooh ooooh ooooh Ooooh ooooh ooooh Don't make Don't make me wait Don't make me wait for you to shine my direction You had my spirits ascend with utmost affection Ooooh ooooh ooooh Qin edoba ou liha tojhil... Qin edoba ou liha tojhil... (You abide in the light) But I learned to forgive the past Move forward to a brighter future Our hearts' love from above beats so fast...oh so vast! These hardships we will surely endure Don't make me wait For a past that will never be As I intended it to be, it was determined by fate God will rescue me from this corrupted captivity Possibly, if I were more patient and less enraged, I could have avoided drifting away and being caged Qin edoba ou liha tojhil... Qin edoba ou liha tojhil... (You abide in the light) Be still, healing's near So, have no flick of fear, For God is here to give us hope and cheer Dona nobis pachem You are as precious as a gem You are unlike them

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Date: 11/17/2015 8:42:00 PM
Nice refrain after each stanza.trying to hum the non-English parts too. Good!
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Date: 11/17/2015 9:46:00 PM
By the way, dona nobis pachem is latin for give us peace :) just so that you are aware of what I'm writing. Have a splendid rest of your week and ta-ta for now.
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Date: 11/17/2015 9:45:00 PM
Thank you!! :) I appreciate this comment. I gave you the pronunciation, dear :) you're silly. THANKS :D -JWEarnings
Date: 11/16/2015 7:29:00 AM
This is well thought out, an epic song and with every verse it keeps playing along, very descriptive lines wove into a hypnotic melody, very good.
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Date: 11/16/2015 7:39:00 AM
Thank you! It's two songs mixed into one, all written by me...Dona nobis pachem is from many songs and composers. I like your description of it. So in depth and great! Thanks for your outlook on it. Have a splendid day!