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Don"t Look In My Window

Don't look in my window Only darkness inside Things better left alone Things i try to hide Like madness and chaos cruelty, anger, and sin Don't look in my window Even light barely comes in Don't look in my window Get back, stay away There's evil inside there And it wants to play!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 2/19/2009 6:57:00 AM
OK, very good verse..a bit egocentric ..soft smile..there's evil in all of us there's even evil in God who do you think created evil. "Evil" is a manmade concept to label things which usely hurt they don't understand the reason for such as death and pain. There would be no life without pain or life without death. YOU carry the LIGHT within you, you don't have to wander in the dark. Light & Love Debbie
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