Don'T Look Back

I had some plans, I had some dreams, 
Not meant to be, or so it seems,

I’d make some cash, tuck it away,
But it did not work out that way,

I’d find a girl; we’d fall in love,
Wound up alone; push came to shove,

I’d have a friend; a place to lean,
People are cold, the streets are mean,

I’d find a place to call my own,
there is no place, I feel at home,

I had a smile, it did not last, 
My happy days are in the past,

Got me a rope, tied to the trees,
Watch my old life, twist in the breeze,

I strike a match, burn it all down,
Find a new dream, in a new town,

There’s nothing here I need to pack,
Just start to walk and don’t look back
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Strong Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 8:54 PM
Totally dig this one!! Awesome poem Luke.
Irwin Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 7:05 AM
Thanks very much Casey!
Bateson Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 7:16 AM
Sad but powerful. Enjoyed this poem. Betty
Irwin Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Betty. Oddly enough I see this one as hopeful as it deals with not quitting but making a new start.
Fisher Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 1:04 PM
Very interesting and intense...and good rhyme.
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