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Don'T Let This Be My Last Nigt

Last night, late at night, i heard the door the door it slammed. I knew ...I knew he was home. Hurry! go to sleep maybe tonight, maybe tonight it will save me. ****! its to late. he knows, he knows I'm awake. ****! here he comes he's drunk. ****! my door hes opening my door! what will it be tonight? Please oh God don't let this be, don't let this be my last night

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Ann Foster

Date: 10/6/2019 10:04:00 AM

so sorry... so sad... excellent poem... topic heartbreaking... prayers for your day and for your nights... Ann

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/4/2015 1:54:00 AM

Crystal, I enjoyed reading this good and old verse tonight:-) Wishing you a fun safe 4th of July. ~luv~ LINDA

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/9/2011 5:26:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup... enjoy the site and its many features as u continue to share creative poetry as this gem with luv...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/9/2011 6:02:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Crystal. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol