Don'T Leave

Never an ache felt
As much as when you left me
Never leave again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Chircop Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 12:10 AM
deep and touching-Charma
Palli Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 12:18 PM
Can feel the pain, Susan
Brown Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 10:29 AM
I am enjoying reading everyone's poetry today. I am glad to see your poetry posted here amongest the others I am reading today Justin. Wishing you a weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
A  Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 7:22 PM
Painful it is when they leave. Enjoyed reading, keep them comming..
Devonshire Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 7:20 PM
Heartfelt and moving, Justin. We can all relate to the feelings you have expressed so well in your senryu. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 7:19 PM
Emotional Senryu Justin.. good expressive words .. luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace