Alisher Mirzoev Poet Rhyme

Don'T Know

I don’t know what to say when I see you,
I don’t know what to do, you’re away.
You’re away, don’t know how, but I feel you,  
I’m in love, but don’t know how to say.

I don’t know maybe you feel the same,
Maybe you want to be with me now.
All I know is only your name,
All I want is by you to be loved.

And I have the only desire,
Spend with you the rest part of my life.
And it burns me inside like a fire,
And for us, for the love, we should strive.  

08.05.2013

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Alisher Mirzoev January 12, 2014 at 2:18 AM Thank you very much for comment, Kelly. Your poems are really great, thanks for sharing it with us - Alisher

Kelly Deschler January 8, 2014 at 4:57 PM I think that we all can relate to this poem, Alisher. You expressed your feelings so well here, that the reader can feel the longing coming through in every line. Really good work, Alisher!...Thank you for the great comments on my poem. I really appreciate it!

Poet Destroyer A September 12, 2013 at 11:22 PM Hello Alisher, stopping by with a late - warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2013 at 6:26 AM - Hey Alisher, welcome to P-Soup! - Thanks for your pleasant and sweet poem. - If you have time read my: "Love Letter", where you will find a simple answer to your "problem" ..... - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us. - I wish you good luck. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Alisher Mirzoev May 18, 2013 at 1:43 PM Hi Anne! Thanks for comment. Of course I'll. Thanks a lot )! The same to you. Alisher Mirzoev May 18, 2013 at 1:40 PM Hi Anne! Thanks for comment. Of course I'll. Thanks a lot )! The same to you.

Elai Cee May 16, 2013 at 5:16 AM Hi Alisher! You make me smile here. Looking forward that you would say it to the person you loved most!---keep smiling Elai. You are free to visit my page and read my poems there. It's an honor to see you there! Alisher Mirzoev May 16, 2013 at 1:18 PM Hi Elai! Glad to see you on my page, and also make you smile ). Hope I would ), I've read your poems, good job! Wish you to go on writting so good poems.