Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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Don't Go

he implores...


"honey, please stay...

because

if you go, you'll...

take our sun away

with you.

darling,

promise we'll

rise up

with the sun

together,

and then watch it sink

into the horizon

at...

the tail-end of dawn"



BRIAN'S CHOICE 7,any form,any theme poetry contest (Winner: 3rd Place)	
Sponsored by Brian Strand
 05/08/2020

"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
Lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables
Date written: 05/08/2020

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Darlene De Beaulieu May 8, 2020 at 1:41 PM Hello Edward, to me it sounds like a romantic poem. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my friend. Edward Ibeh May 9, 2020 at 10:36 AM Snow flurries? In May? Good grief! What state do you live in, Darlene? Darlene De Beaulieu May 9, 2020 at 8:30 AM Hello Edward, we had snow flurries last night. Strang weather for the month of May. Enjoy your day my friend. Edward Ibeh May 8, 2020 at 3:02 PM Glad you liked this poem, Darlene:-) You have a nice day, too, my friend!