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he implores... "honey, please stay... because if you go, you'll... take our sun away with you. darling, promise we'll rise up with the sun together, and then watch it sink into the horizon at... the tail-end of dawn" BRIAN'S CHOICE 7,any form,any theme poetry contest (Winner: 3rd Place) Sponsored by Brian Strand 05/08/2020 "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables Date written: 05/08/2020

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Date: 5/8/2020 1:41:00 PM
Hello Edward, to me it sounds like a romantic poem. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/9/2020 10:36:00 AM
Snow flurries? In May? Good grief! What state do you live in, Darlene?
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/9/2020 8:30:00 AM
Hello Edward, we had snow flurries last night. Strang weather for the month of May. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/8/2020 3:02:00 PM
Glad you liked this poem, Darlene:-) You have a nice day, too, my friend!

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