Patricio Meneses-Carrington Poet Heroic Couplet

Don'T Give Up

Don't give up when times are hard against the graft
Don't give up when breaking the mold you pause for a laugh
Don't forget all the good times that you had
Don't remember the bad times you were mad
Don't forget the struggle and the strain
Again and again and again and again
Don't be crying when the sun is shining again
Don't be the one hiding when its time to ascend
Don't give up when the going gets tough
Don't be destroyed when the times are rough
Don't give up.

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Beata Agustin October 8, 2025 at 11:27 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.