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Don'T Get Left Behind

Two men sailing on a yacht One will be taken the other one not Two women going out for a walk one day One will be taken the other will stay. God so loved the world His Son's life it did cost Few will be saved Many will be lost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/17/2009 8:56:00 AM
Leon, you don't know me but I have at least 700 poems in my personal collection, would you be interested in some of them so you can put them to song? They are all Spiritually based poems and you may use some if you wish, also read some of your writings and I enjoy them,God bless to you and yours always Robert A. Ball
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Date: 8/15/2009 9:25:00 AM
I missed some of the excellent poetry written and posted here yesterday Leon. I am enjoying reading them this morning. Thank you for sharing yours. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2009 7:21:00 AM
Nicely written Rhyme about your faith. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/15/2009 5:51:00 AM
a powerful write poem, thanks for your kind comments, me and josh have been married 16 months on the 19th august,we catching you up LOL just kidding, have a great and special day on the 18th, God bless you both from diane
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Date: 8/14/2009 8:03:00 PM
To make believers out of so many it will take that kind of an act, even then there will be much skepticism I'm afraid. God Bless. Ron
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Date: 8/14/2009 4:41:00 PM
A sobering reminder here, Leon. Well done! Donna
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Date: 8/14/2009 3:19:00 PM
You cleverly present a powerful message in clear, concise terms. Indeed, Leon, I fear many will be lost. And like the men sailing and the women walking, we never know when our time will be up. God has blessed you with a gifted pen and surely you will not be "left behind." Powerful poetry! Love, Carolyn
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