Don't Forget

When the mourners turn away from the grave
Don't want them to be sad of what I could have been
When I make it to the Gates of heaven
Don't turn your head in shame from me God
I only lived selfishly till I knew You
When the wind has torn the leaves from my grave
Don't forget to think of me
When the Spring brings buds back to the trees
And when the Sun is warming your brow
Remember my clear blue eyes and a smile
Being human isn't easy as  we're told
Bills still need paying
Food still needs to be gathered and bought
Dark still need the light
And love is the only guarantee
Can you hear me when the birds sing
Or when the crickets call on a summers eve
Can you see me in the morning when you wake
Can you taste me when you have a cool drink
Do you feel me  when I hold you in the night
Love never dies
We take it with us when we go
It's just harder to remember

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/16/2013 9:07:00 PM
Beautiful work! Love is so much easier to feel and be immersed in when it's happening in the moment... though dimmer with distance and time, it still never dies. I like your style, mate. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 10/18/2012 2:35:00 PM
Wow! I'm totally loving it. I like what you've said about love. Sometimes life's issues trample on us so that our love is veiled yet it always remains -we just need to remind ourselves of it. Nice write Patrick. Very nice!
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Date: 9/21/2012 8:12:00 AM
love this awesome poem of yours Patrick... so profound...
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Date: 9/12/2012 5:49:00 PM
Patrick, I was wondering just the other day if u had any new stuff out...It has been a while since you've written..keep that ink flowing, poet! That second half shows such moving dialogue with our Heavenly Father...enjoyed the flow!! Best 2 u, gwendolen
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Date: 8/12/2012 12:53:00 PM
Lots to think about in this great verse. Weaving the human experience with nature is always so special. Great write Patrick
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Date: 7/23/2012 3:41:00 PM
This was a pleasant poem Patrick, like it very much. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/23/2012 7:40:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments and this poem is good and keep up the good work it is really impressive. God bless bob
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Date: 7/20/2012 10:08:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this well penned ballad which is filled with deep emotion. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/13/2012 4:29:00 PM
a super sensitive write Patrick.. so genuinely penned with deep emotions.. luv it ..luv..
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Date: 7/13/2012 6:40:00 AM
Wow where did this week go? I am reading some amazing poetry this morning. It was a pleasure to read yours and I thank you for sharing it Patrick. Have a great weekend and I will be back Monday to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2012 9:01:00 PM
Hello, Patrick, ,, a very sweet dedication.. I assume that she is the love of your life.. which will never die.. thank you for sharing...pd
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Date: 7/12/2012 6:04:00 PM
well that's very interesting..nicely written patrick...=)
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