Don'T Drop the Soap

I bet you're out of hope.

Dude, don't drop the soap.

I bet you find it hard to cope.

Dude, you're crude and rude,

And full of dirt and oil.

Wash yourself clean,

Because you are mean,

I don't wanna be on your team.

You hung yourself from a short rope.

When you shower,

Dude, don't drop the soap.

Next time you'll treat someone right.

Next time you'll wanna do it too.

Next time maybe you'll wanna live the life that's true.

Maybe you'll stop being so cut throat,

But in the meantime,

Dude, don't drop the soap.

8-15-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Andresen Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 10:36 AM
Bravo...well done. oxox love Anne-Lise
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December 24, 2011 at 7:09 PM
Nichole~Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.
Eastman Avatar
December 17, 2011 at 7:29 AM
Very imaginative! Loved reading it!
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 2:02 PM
Thank you Nicole for sharing your creative poetry with us. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol
Francis Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 1:33 PM
LOVELY.
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