Don'T Blow It
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Just a new song lyric, there is no music, could be pop, could be r-b c-w great as a rock song or a slaqm song or even rap. Anyone wanting to try and put music to it go for it, then send me what you comp up with at veebdosa.com
DON'T BLOW IT.
Slow down; life is not so real
Break down;
love is all you can feel.
What little time you have to be,
don't blow it,
children know how love should be,
just show it.
Don't blow it.
Fine line;
life is just sureal,
make time,
there's no time you can steal;
what little love that you may find,
surround it
Don't blow it.
if you have a dream,
be glad you've found it
Surround it.
Don't blow it.
Don't blow it.
Don't blow it.
© ron wilson aka Vee Bdosa the Doylestown Poet
June 10 2016 have no music for this, and am welcoming anyone who wants to give it a try, I am just too busy right now. so give it a try, then send what you come up with to veebdosa@aol.com. See how many versions we can come up with. Good luck.
Copyright © Vee Bdosa | Year Posted 2016
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