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Don'T Be Colder Than the Winter Snow

We met in early summer when roses were blooming, and all we thought of was being in love more than any other! People look at us and clearly see: what they had once in their grasp and heartbeats, but they lost it to uncertainty without the scented wind's breath on their cheeks! Don't walk in bright moonlight so sadly, forgetting that it shone for us so happily: show your gladness for having me! Don't be colder than the winter snow: you have my hands to keep you warm, never be afraid of walking through the storm! By morning you'll discover the calmest sea, and the brightest sky over a pretty willow! Don't be colder than the winter snow, lay on my chest, it's your soft pillow; look further, see a beautiful star that stupefies; watch thousands of fireflies traveling to Mars! Don't be colder than the winter snow, and think that no flower will ever grow! Written on 11/12/2016

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Date: 11/12/2016 5:44:00 AM
Nice lyric, Andrew:) enjoyed:)
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Andrew Crisci
Date: 11/14/2016 2:52:00 PM
Thank you, Jo for your kind comment. Your response has been appreciated. Have a great day. Best Wishes, Andrew.
Date: 11/12/2016 12:17:00 AM
Soft and beautiful.
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Andrew Crisci
Date: 11/14/2016 2:57:00 PM
Hi, Christy. I hope you are having a nice day. I like to thank you for your kind comment. Your response is both encouraging and uplifting. I wish you success in your writing endears. Keep on writing and inspiring other poets. Warm Regards, Andrew.

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