Don'T Be Afraid

For several days her daughter would say
The angels said, "Don't be afraid"
Her mother simply dismissed it
Like it was a childhood game she played

But soon she started to worry
For the little girl kept telling this tale
She also said she talked to Jesus
And she described it in such detail

She told her mother that Jesus said
Tomorrow, He's taking her home
The little girl was only three years old
These things, she couldn't have known

Her mother was just a little concerned
For each day it was always the same
Was it just a little girl's imagination?
She was sure it was a childhood game

Well tomorrow came and all was fine
And her daughter never uttered a sound
So she fiiled up the pool, only eight inches deep
And that's where, her little girl drowned

Now, this story is true, every single word
For it happened to some friends of mine
This story took place many years ago
And their grief grew more distant in time

But I just couldn't imagine, the pain that they felt
As they remember what their daughter would say
The Angels would tell her, "Don't be afraid"
And that Jesus would take her away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 21, 2010 at 9:40 PM
Yeah-WOW.
Taylor Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 6:10 AM
Wow that's some story.
M Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 9:55 AM
It's uplifting to believe in angels. I hope your friends (if believers) found comfort/peace in their daughter's description of the angel's words "no need to fear" rather than viewing the angel's visit as an ironic child's tale. Larry, I am overjoyed by your recent comments. (No higher honor for me than to have you read my poem and to receive a pat on the back!)
Roberts Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 9:32 AM
beautifully written
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